The Grand Creation's Story Bible

**Riglax Krom** Wed Aug 11, 2010 12:42 am

Reasons for this Thread:
The Bible is the Topic where a summary of the Story is being hosted. Fully updated.
Although The Bible IS NOT for brainstorming, or giving ideas. Look this for general.
Below the bible post each of the checked and finished Chapters, will be posted, by me or by someone who has a finished copy of it.
When the chapters are in working they'll have their own Topic again look the TGC Official Topic.

The Official GC Bible

The Grand Creation, evolves around the making of the Prototype Robot and takes place around 150,000 before the Great Cataclysm. What's happening is that the GBs are working in Teams and use the Construction Robots and some Agori to build a massive prototype Robot. Of course that's not it. It would be boring if the only had tech problems and lunchtime. They face a big tech problem. ( tongue

) How would they manipulate from inside? How would they construct, path to check it's mechanisms? Invidior, a GB finds the solution. He designs the Gravity Stabilizers allowing them to create gravity from any angle.

But later, when the GB start built them, he believes that credit must be given.

Osavus meanwhile, a wise GB, strongly supports with his words that they must not build such thing. Because it might be dangerous. Once Invidior, meets with Osavus, they talk and Invidior convinces him to sabotage it.

But the GBs realize they can't do this alone. They need the help of warriors, that only care for money. They come in contact with four henchmen that if paid will do anything. They hire them promising that they will give them the best implants they got. While three Agori who think the idea of the robot is the worst thing the GBs has done, and unite with the GBs to stop it.

But that's about to change. An Agori overhears their plan. He call some of his friends to help him. Those guys, like the idea believe it will work out and that the're would be a huge benefit. And if sabotaged it, it will be the actual threat.

They come to hands while other events evolve too. An idea is that they try to shut down the Construction Robots. Through this adventure Invidior becomes jealous of the powers of the robot and wants them for himself.

At the end, the "good guys" catch the Team of the bad ones right when they are ready to sabotage it. Where Osavus and Invidior battle each other, because Invidior wants the robot for himself. After a battle the ''good guys'' win, but the power source interface is fatally damaged by a mistake at the battle. At the last chapter the thing goes kaboom and most of the evil guys happen to die at it. A bit of irony. Only Invidior will survive.

Later He is placed in a prison.

As we move, the serial we go deeper and deeper and see that people slowly lose faith to the GB. And we see that they might not actually be a god gift but a big threat also. Also we see how easily someone can became evil. As well as the GBs inventions. Main point.

**Riglax Krom** Wed Aug 11, 2010 12:43 am

Prologue Expansion

**Riglax Krom** Wed Aug 11, 2010 12:44 am

Ch.1 Expansion

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Ch.2 Expansion

**Riglax Krom** Wed Aug 11, 2010 12:46 am

Ch. 3 Expansion

**Riglax Krom** Wed Aug 11, 2010 12:46 am

Ch. 4 Expansion

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Ch. 5 Expansion

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