Origin's Story Bible
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Origin's Story Bible
Origin's Story Bible
*It will start with Tahu asking Ackar what is this place and Ackar will be like narrating it.
*Many billions of years ago, two large spiral galaxies collided. As the supermassive black holes collided at the center, a massive blast wave was sent out as well as ferocious jets of matter from the double-black hole, seeding the area around with elements, but tearing apart the galaxy as well. These waves of gases collided with a solar system nearby containing a rocky, barren world called Sphereus Magna. The waves of matter seeded it with the necessary elements to form protodermis. Over the years, protodermis formed in the core of the planet and seeped through the surface, turning the barren world into a lush planet full of life.
*Glatorian & Agori evolve and make 3 Tribes in 3 Kingdoms.
1) Roxtus (Stone Tribe)
2) Magnacus (Magma Tribe)
3) Galo (Sea Tribe)
*Mysteriously 2 moths after the kingdoms form the GBs Arrive
*The 3 Leaders of the Kingdoms travel to greet the GBs
* While they are gone a Hermit from the South starts disputes between the 3 Kingdoms
* He tricks the inhabitants of the Kingdoms to murder there rulers when they return.
* The GB start to alter the biology of these organic reptiles on the planet
* The disputes turn into skirmishes until one day Roxtus declares war.
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So how about we get into things such as early disputes among the different tribes, and how the element lords got involved in some of them. I'm thinking maybe we should have the people slowly begin to distrust the element lords, and some might even become more loyal to them.
Those disagreements would begin to cause problems that would lead up to how everyone turned against one another during the Core War.
Those disagreements would begin to cause problems that would lead up to how everyone turned against one another during the Core War.
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That would go in group 4.
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Updated the Story Bible.
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So we want the first tribes to be created as those Three? How do we reach the 7 tribes and the GBs as leaders?
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They will go into an ancient war then be saved by the GB's become 7 and become an untied kingdom thing.
I'm working on that ATM.
I'm working on that ATM.
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Yes, but not the Core War it will be called, Altus Bellum (Ancient War in Latin).
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Progress.
Nice... making some progress. So we can brainstorm about Origins too.
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Yes anyone can.
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Well last night I was thinking that I think maybe Group 1 will feature everything up to Altus Bellum then there will be a Serial on the War, written by another group.
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Re: Origin's Story Bible
From the creation of Spherus Magna to the start of the War.
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Yeah,
Yeah, nice. So Group 5 will come after we are done with Origins?
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Yes Group 3 will be retired as all of Group 3's writers move to Group 5.
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How are we going to go about writing serials? Does each of us get assigned a short story to work on our own or what?
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before we get to that we need to finishe the story bible.
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But I thought we were writing a serial about what Lien and the other Agori do after Bota Magna breaks away from the rest of the planet...right?Jack of the Krom wrote:Well last night I was thinking that I think maybe Group 1 will feature everything up to Altus Bellum then there will be a Serial on the War, written by another group.
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What? Origins is about SM before the Shattering!
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Updated!!!
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Are we going to write the serials by ourselves? And, will some of the serials be dealing with the timeframe we're working in but be sort of off topic? I want to do something with the Rock Tribe AKA Skrall.
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Well we are going to include how the Skrall evolved. I'll make sure you get to write that but you need to give me ideas for the story bible.
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I meant that's what I thought Group One would do.Legolover-361 wrote:But I thought we were writing a serial about what Lien and the other Agori do after Bota Magna breaks away from the rest of the planet...right?Jack of the Krom wrote:Well last night I was thinking that I think maybe Group 1 will feature everything up to Altus Bellum then there will be a Serial on the War, written by another group.
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1.) Lein died before the Shattering You should knew that!
2.) He meant Group 3
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2.) He meant Group 3
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