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Post  Celupnus Krom Wed Jul 14, 2010 8:55 pm

Origin's Story Bible



*It will start with Tahu asking Ackar what is this place and Ackar will be like narrating it.

*Many billions of years ago, two large spiral galaxies collided. As the supermassive black holes collided at the center, a massive blast wave was sent out as well as ferocious jets of matter from the double-black hole, seeding the area around with elements, but tearing apart the galaxy as well. These waves of gases collided with a solar system nearby containing a rocky, barren world called Sphereus Magna. The waves of matter seeded it with the necessary elements to form protodermis. Over the years, protodermis formed in the core of the planet and seeped through the surface, turning the barren world into a lush planet full of life.

*Glatorian & Agori evolve and make 3 Tribes in 3 Kingdoms.
1) Roxtus (Stone Tribe)
2) Magnacus (Magma Tribe)
3) Galo (Sea Tribe)

*Mysteriously 2 moths after the kingdoms form the GBs Arrive

*The 3 Leaders of the Kingdoms travel to greet the GBs

* While they are gone a Hermit from the South starts disputes between the 3 Kingdoms

* He tricks the inhabitants of the Kingdoms to murder there rulers when they return.

* The GB start to alter the biology of these organic reptiles on the planet

* The disputes turn into skirmishes until one day Roxtus declares war.


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Post  Legolover-361 Sat Aug 07, 2010 9:38 am

So how about we get into things such as early disputes among the different tribes, and how the element lords got involved in some of them. I'm thinking maybe we should have the people slowly begin to distrust the element lords, and some might even become more loyal to them.

Those disagreements would begin to cause problems that would lead up to how everyone turned against one another during the Core War.
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Post  Celupnus Krom Sat Aug 07, 2010 2:03 pm

That would go in group 4. Wink
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Post  Celupnus Krom Sun Aug 08, 2010 6:54 am

Updated the Story Bible.
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Post  Riglax Krom Sun Aug 08, 2010 9:28 am

So we want the first tribes to be created as those Three? How do we reach the 7 tribes and the GBs as leaders?
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Post  Celupnus Krom Sun Aug 08, 2010 9:29 am

They will go into an ancient war then be saved by the GB's become 7 and become an untied kingdom thing.

I'm working on that ATM.
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Post  Riglax Krom Sun Aug 08, 2010 9:30 am

Nice. So Origins will feature and a war...
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Post  Celupnus Krom Sun Aug 08, 2010 9:34 am

Yes, but not the Core War it will be called, Altus Bellum (Ancient War in Latin).
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Post  Riglax Krom Sun Aug 08, 2010 9:36 am

Nice... making some progress. So we can brainstorm about Origins too.
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Post  Celupnus Krom Sun Aug 08, 2010 9:37 am

Yes anyone can. Smile
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Post  Riglax Krom Sun Aug 08, 2010 9:38 am

Will it feature only the war or will we broke it into books?
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Post  Celupnus Krom Sun Aug 08, 2010 9:40 am

Well last night I was thinking that I think maybe Group 1 will feature everything up to Altus Bellum then there will be a Serial on the War, written by another group.
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Post  Riglax Krom Sun Aug 08, 2010 9:42 am

Lein's Tale? So what Origins will feature?
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Post  Celupnus Krom Sun Aug 08, 2010 9:44 am

From the creation of Spherus Magna to the start of the War.
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Post  Riglax Krom Sun Aug 08, 2010 9:46 am

Yeah, nice. So Group 5 will come after we are done with Origins?
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Post  Celupnus Krom Sun Aug 08, 2010 9:48 am

Yes Group 3 will be retired as all of Group 3's writers move to Group 5.
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Post  Toa Naruto Wed Aug 11, 2010 7:37 am

How are we going to go about writing serials? Does each of us get assigned a short story to work on our own or what?
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Post  Celupnus Krom Wed Aug 11, 2010 8:51 am

before we get to that we need to finishe the story bible. Wink
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Post  Legolover-361 Wed Aug 11, 2010 2:20 pm

Jack of the Krom wrote:Well last night I was thinking that I think maybe Group 1 will feature everything up to Altus Bellum then there will be a Serial on the War, written by another group.
But I thought we were writing a serial about what Lien and the other Agori do after Bota Magna breaks away from the rest of the planet...right?
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Post  Riglax Krom Wed Aug 11, 2010 2:23 pm

What? Origins is about SM before the Shattering!
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Post  Celupnus Krom Wed Aug 11, 2010 2:50 pm

Updated!!!
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Post  Toa Naruto Thu Aug 12, 2010 7:40 am

Are we going to write the serials by ourselves? And, will some of the serials be dealing with the timeframe we're working in but be sort of off topic? I want to do something with the Rock Tribe AKA Skrall.
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Post  Celupnus Krom Thu Aug 12, 2010 8:01 am

Well we are going to include how the Skrall evolved. Wink I'll make sure you get to write that but you need to give me ideas for the story bible. Wink
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Post  Legolover-361 Thu Aug 12, 2010 11:41 am

Legolover-361 wrote:
Jack of the Krom wrote:Well last night I was thinking that I think maybe Group 1 will feature everything up to Altus Bellum then there will be a Serial on the War, written by another group.
But I thought we were writing a serial about what Lien and the other Agori do after Bota Magna breaks away from the rest of the planet...right?
I meant that's what I thought Group One would do.
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Post  Riglax Krom Thu Aug 12, 2010 11:48 am

1.) Lein died before the Shattering Wink You should knew that! tongue
2.) He meant Group 3
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