Official The Grand Creation Topic

So, with the Serials starting soon (11 August) I decided it was time for this. Forget this we are on!

What's this?
What the actual goal of this Topic is to be the main place for the Serial. All the brainstorming, related discussion, suggestions, ideas, concerns, questions, problems, etc. goes HERE.

What goes to other Topics you may ask? The Characters Topic is the place, where we will discuss about the Characters personalities and see how they react into different situations. That Topic is meant to evolve depth in the characters and as well help the writers.

There also and the Story  Topic, where you can view the correct story and see finished chapters. No drafts or ideas actually go there.  

Other than that, each chapter will also have one Topic. (Chapters Topic) Where the writers will write drafts and say ideas and adjustments to the chapters.

The Story

General Info
The Text will be 3rd Person.
We can't actually name many Great Beings. Heremus and Angonce have no death or born date so we are free to use them. Invidior is jealous about power, while Osavus want the project shut down. But, we can have unnamed Great Beings.

Also Invidior is younger than Osavus.

Prototype Robot features:

BS01 wrote:The prototype is fully mechanical and incorporates none of the nanotechnology used in the Matoran Universe. It had an unstable power source, which was the cause of its destruction. Also unlike the Matoran Universe, there was no #### guiding the robot, making it non-sentient. The robot does have a number of offensive and defensive arrays, and is capable of emitting power and gravitational beams. It is approximately 27,000,000 feet tall, two-thirds the height of the Matoran Universe.

Also the prologue will feature how they come up with the idea to build the #### thing, while the next chapter they would almost be ready. Simply because:

Rusty Red Raptor wrote:I don't think we can narrate the building of the Prototype in 10 or so chapters, but I also don't want it to be this whole huge thing that might be hard to follow.

Prologue, narrating how they got the idea.
Chapter one will have Invidior's solution and the meeting.

Usable Characters

GBs:
Invidior - Mad GB (ROS)
Osavus
Heremus
Angonce
Unamed GB.

(old poll)

Agori & Preliator (A&P)

Four Preliator Henchmen paid by Osavus and Invidior to help them. (Names are welcomed!)
Three Agori following Invidior and Osavus by their will.
Raanu (younger version)
Ackar (younger version)
Vastus (younger version)
A bunch of characters for A&P we can think of. (Suggestions are welcomed!)

Sequel
TGC will have a small serial, Price of Jealousy, (5 Chapters) where Invidior's story will develop, until the moment he touches the Ignika and becomes mad. At the End he's placed on the Fortress.

Links

Story Topic

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Yeah, I like the idea of more symbolic names. If we could twist a Latin word, like we did with Preliator, or find some strange language that isn't very common, but not bizzarely unique, that would be perfect, if ya get where I'm coming from.

What's Preliator?

One of each? And should they be working together to sabotage the robot out of their own free will, or should it be kind of like a 'grr i hate you, and i'm only working with you to accomplish my own goals' type thing?

How about Consillium as a GB name (its Latin for intelligence)

Yep.

Okay guys, for just any names, I found this really awesome translator, and it lets you translate words/phrases/sentences into multiple languages at once. I'm just experimenting and spitballing if we ever need names that kind of mean something.

I just looked up any word that might possibly be GB related or useful in characterizing characters. I'm sure we won't even need 9/10ths of them. But this is what I do when I'm bored.XD

Spoiler:

That's all for now. Be creative and don't kill me for posting such a long post.

Actually, I think the "evil" GBs shouldn't really be that evil, and they should appear to die at the end, but actually used the explosion as cover for their escape. Then they hide out somewhere and plot revenge against the other GBs (possibly blaming them for any disfigurements caused by the explosion).

P.S. Did you get the idea of evil GBs from me? Because I actually invented several characters that were evil GBs, and one of them was named...Krakax. (Please don't use a character named Krakax without my permission, though)

If everyone thinks they died, but they didn't really, and are secretly out for revenge, it makes for a way cooler story. And then you could use the characters in other stories, and not have to build up these characters, but then kill them off (like the '08 Makuta). They could disguise themselves and sabotage the GBs' later creations, such as the MU--possibly causing the glitch that gave Matoran free will.

P.S. Maybe Invidior is jealous of another GB's success (kind of like Mutran and Chirox) and, as revenge, sabotaged the robot because that GB was working on it (possibly in charge of it). Then, after the explosion, Invidior is horribly disfigured, and blames the GB in charge of the project on it, and later, when they're working on the MU, Invidior sneaks into the lab and messes with the experiments (Matoran), which later causes them to have free will. Also, possibly, they sabotaged the Krana essence, causing the other GBs to create Zyglak instead, who hate the GBs.

Think about it! If you keep them alive, you open up a whole new story!

Um, I know I wasn't here when the 11th came around, sorry, so,

Do we have most of the GB's names? I saw Invidor and Osavus, and I know there's two others, but what about the other three?

There are seven GB's right?

Kazi out.

I'm not sure exactly how many GB's there are, but I'm thinking definitely more than seven. I mean, seven people, Great Beings or not, can't built an entire universe full of Toa and Matoran and stuff, can they? And there's a huge list of names I posted somewhere earlier on this topic, I think, just as suggestions, because I was bored one day.